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Sense-less

 

 

 

 

 

The rustling of leaves,
a stirring of the wind.


Those things that I hear
grow fainter...


and fainter...

 

and fainter...

 

Until nothing but silence
is left to me.

 

I hear nothing
but my thoughts and fears.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Great how you can fit so much feeling into so few lines. I can tell where your inspiration for this comes from, and I admire you for putting this harsh reality into words, and doing it so beautifully. Excellent.

    David.

  • I know what you are going through must be very scary and intimidating. But hold hope for yourself, as you will have faithful friends that care and will hold your had guiding you through the darkest of times. So many things can go wrong at the same time and your world may seem like it's crumbling, but it really is the hidden fact that there is a new begining waiting for you upon your arrival to the other end.If you feel lost, alone, or scared I am here for you. The better and the worst
    <3 kate

  • Deep my friend

  • :(

    This is full of depth .. but here's to hoping that will never come true. You'll never get to skit my hopeless accent Hehe.
    Wishes are with you for tomorrow hun.
    Take care!
    Hannah
    x x x


  • maralisa silver member
    May 7

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    aw this is deeply my freind thank you for sharingmaralisa

  • Intense
    but dont let whats inside
    overwhelm the calm awaiting you from the outside
    Lady Anya - Lady of Peace

  • nope your going to hear me in your head lol. bc i am just so cool like that lol. since you are my gentleman and my dream catcher. this is a beautiful write and i hope everyhing goes well for you

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