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[ Rushed upon me ]

Rushed upon me
like a snake in disguise,

The venom was deadly
the memory was in-curable,

 

I don't know what caused this

I can only wonder,

 

I lie in sighs and wish for hope

This short end rope will end sooner than I cry for,

 

My dearest wish

is for this to end,

 

I crave for peace

and for love.

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