A I am Me
roof to its height
four walls and let my soul reach
laughter, tears a the sky which is my right
place to go thru all the since my birth to reach for
years. Where family dwells earth to stake my claim
they calm the fears. For stepping To make my place on this
into the world at large, for growing up this world I know
and taking charge, of your life to blossom in
and having faith. That home is find a way
always, that one safe place to to even
run to tho the times get I grow
tough and when you feel could
you've had just enough how
The quiet peace within roots
those walls where family these
abounds, all fear is stalled Without
A contest entry
- Shape Poetry FUN! FUN ! How creative are you? by GotLilt.
700 points, ended May 19, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awesome !!
You write beautifully and full of heart. Keep it up !
God bless. Debby
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AWESOME azz job here congrats on the silver! well deserved.....! took me a min to figure out to read the tree from roots up.... awesome idea tho love it..... thank you for sharing.....!
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Bravo!
Glad you got that Silver. Please...you did such a fine job with this...go back & edit out those darn spaces. It's not easy to do 'shape' poetry here...I've done a few & know how hard it is to do well!
You're very creative & I admire your talent! 
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Took me a minute to read the 'tree' - it goes up! Very creative. Nice job!
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I love this!!!!
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