Lie to me Baby
I love it
I like how you can
calm me down
with all the right words
Tell me what I
want to hear
I love it
Reassure me
I'll believe you
I always do
So lie to me
Turn me on
Speak the words
Repeat them
It is a song
to the carousel
of white lies
and pink lined clouds
Good intentions
and the
worst intentions
geared towards
your lover herself
Baby please
lie to me
Ease my suspicions
Hide the evidence
Find your truth
and stick to it
and still stick to me
I know you lie for
my own good
Maybe someday
there will be
no more secrets
no more bailouts
no more sneaking
no more harmless lies
no more tears..
Until then I cry
over every white lie
and every loophole
you manage to find
I'll cope, no fear
and I love you my Dear
The benefit of the doubt,
and I, forever
are yours.
Author notes
I don't remember when I wrote this, but here it is. Please, I really do want to hear your thoughts.
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i love it! the message is a little miss guided but poetry allows you yo do that well. great write
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I know I'm a bit late on commenting on this but I haven't been on in a while. I really love this poem. It really speaks to me. I'm not quite sure how the title fits into it though. But I still love it.
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Until then I cry
over every white lie
and every loophole
you manage to find
I'll cope, no fear
and I love you my Dear
The benefit of the doubt,
and I, forever
are yours. "
I love this stanza. Its a nice way to end it...kinda ties it together.
nice write.
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very nice but i dont know the title dosent really go with the poem but even then the poem is good and i know that even the little white lies hurt and little white lies lead to big black lies
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oooh, screams for a world of hurt. Stuck in love with an illusion are the worse ones. Great poem, sounds so confident and inviting at first but the truth reveals itself at the end.
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I thought it was wonderfully written. I could even relate to it =] I think maybe the first segment could've been split up, even if it was just once-- though there was nice flow, it just seemed too clumped up. But yes-- I loved it. Great job. And I love the title, by the way =]
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I really enjoyed reading this. I think some punctuation could help add emphasis to your piece. other than that, everything flowed well and was very descriptive. the title is also very compelling.
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wow, this is really really great!
I love it i love it i love it :]
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I love these lines; "Until then I cry
over every white lie" and "The benefit of the doubt,
and I, forever
are yours." They really ended the poem of well. (The backround suits the poem perfectly! Like cracks in a relationship.) Great write hun. Xds-gX
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hm. Kind of sounds like me in a way... I think you really did a good job writing this. You really captured me with the way you wrote. Keep up your amazing work!
CrimsonViper -
i really like the scheme of words used,and the feeling you're putting out's really projected with the ways you describe it. pretty good stuff man.
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Many white lies can often turn black, and will poison a relationship, making it impossibly unhealthy. I liked your line breaks and the ending.
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This is a very powerful piece. I enjoyed your wording and the left align fit perfectly. Wonderful piece, so simple, yet so.. impacting. Loved it.
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very very good, i have had relationships like this i can relate to what your saying x
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this had a really nice flow to it...I liked what you had to say...thank you for sharing...peace and light...kp
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