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Unfurling Rose

L ovely girl stands at the brink
A ll dressed up in lace and pink
U nsure of what the future holds
R elying on her heart of gold
E arly years perhaps unkind
N ow look forward, joy unfold

A rch of grace~ my Lovely embrace-
M end her wings and wash her face
B less her efforts day by day
E ncircle her,  light her way
R elease her dove from its hidden place.

R ose unfurled beyond compare
O f water born, yet to fly the air
S ister true-burst forth, expose
E ssence pure: Lauren Amber Rose 

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Written for me by a dear friend.

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  • beautiful poem

  • Thank you sweetie
    Love you!!
    K

  • Beautiful! Just like you.


  • Ice Queen
    May 6

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    This is absolutely briilliant. Whoever wrote this for you did a wonderful job. Their poetry is amazing, tell them wonderfully written and good job for me.


  • Selithia
    May 6

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    This is brilliant! How wonderful it is to have friends that care so much... Your friend did a wonderful job. And it describes you,alright.
    ♥ -Sel

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