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So Mote It Be

Simple needs met forth by wholly want
The holes in my life no longer to flaunt
Still though they are remembered far
Those shadows have no worth to a star
I hold all life with gentler hands
And let fall the most tainted of the sands
As will permits I go life and travel
I'll let this new path begin its unravel

Earth holds this love together
Water showers it to grow
Air sweeps away the problems
And fire fuels this fiery passion

So mote it be

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  • NyteShade
    November 8

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    Just had to stop by and read a Poem of yours sis. This is very beautifully written and it has a lovely flow. Wonderfully crafted. well done


  • lucian silver member
    November 6
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    Very fluid and poetic. ^.^ Flowed nicely.


  • Eras
    September 24

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    An' It Harm None

    The title caught my eye, and I couldn't look away. Simply divine in its words. I truly love the temp of this short but empowering poem.


  • Blakthorn
    May 6
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    So joyful and warming. Nice, I like this^^