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.My Beloved Heather.

Oh for so long have I waited for this
A girl I needed all my life
One you would always miss
The only girl I want as my wife.

Yes I'm rough with words
But I never mean to hurt you
I'm sorry all these problems occured
I promise we'll get that cross tattoo..

I love you so much baby girl
Your the greatest girl out there
Everytime we kiss my fingers curl
I think one time we have to do it on a chair..

But seriously
Your my world
Without you I'm nothing
Together we're everything..
We can beat anything
I love you so much,
Be my angel forever..
.Now kiss me.

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I love her, I really do.

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  • this is so sweet ... you are lucky to have her, you really are