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the ultimate trojan

I’m all cheery on the outside

Believe me, if you ever saw me in public

You’d probably think I was on something

But that’s outside

Inside is different

Inside is dark, lonely, and hateful

Sometimes I wonder how the two ever got together

Like when someone talks to me about something

Sometimes I don’t even listen

I just shut of and think

About what they would look like dead?

Or

About what human flesh tastes like?

How morbid right?

But that’s what the real me is like

Why on earth would you unleash something like that?

Just to ‘be yourself’

What if one day I answered those questions?

But don’t worry

That side of me won’t ever get out

I put shackles on her

I promise

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  • wey!

    thanks alot i-vomit-sunshine
    and i've put the categories into adult as you said cookiezeal
    thanks for the comments
    check out my other work

  • Welcome to All Poetry~

    Well, *swallows*. This is very...disturbing, but certainly imaginative.
    word choices are correct for such a subject matter.

    Could you please edit the category into 'adult' for the sake of young audiences? That would be appreciated.
    You can also repost this into the new "Journal" option. It is listed to the 'RIGHT" menu under "Related Links".

    Thank you for sharing.

  • Very dark and demonic.
    i absolutely LOVE it. xD