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Sticks...

pick-up sticks
she builds her nest
twig by twig
 

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  • Phoenix Rising
    June 8
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    this is cute i like it


  • Haiku Kin
    June 5

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    Heehee! How cute. I had to read it a second time before I got it, then I remembered that old game, and it all clicked. Nice "aha" moment, and a cute image.

    Nicely done!


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    May 14

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    I see a lil Robin hard at work to build a home for her family. I love how your haikus always express SO much in just the few words used


  • Blindlover
    May 7
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    short and sweet. Well done. powerful in those three little lines.


  • kyew
    May 7

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    I was hoping this was a 'ku when I saw the title. was not disappointed!

    glad to see you still around


    • haikumonk gold member
      May 7
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      Thanks... I appreciate seeing you drop by. Thanks also for the great comment.

  • Bjarne gold member
    May 7
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    Nice

    Well done, Mr. Simplicity Ku!
    bj


  • Peteskid gold member
    May 6
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    yes, a sure sign of spring, pick up sticks... nature's architects...PK


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 6

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    excellent~

    This must be the birds mating season
    A nest in my neighbors shrubbery and one up behind her a/c on the ledge...
    Great ku sweetie
    I have up a new one drop by when ya can
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Mari Goes gold member
    May 6

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    Saw a pigeon doing that few days ago
    Your haiku made me smile again thinking of what I saw, thanks

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