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School without students or teachers...

An old wooden desk stands
                                within a dusty sunlit room.

Paint and wood cracked on the walls
                                          Silence;Remembering the turning of pages.

All that's left is a memory of the true
                                    education that once lined these walls.

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  • She burns
    May 6
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    Powerful and deep, so true

  • I went to a schoolboard meeting for my political science class and one speaker, which happened to be the mother of one of the members was speaking against her son and the members decision on closing down a couple of elementary schools. The older lady gave a speech and in it she reminised over the her childhood school which was only one room and she said the same last night just about. This reminded me of that!!!! This is a good poem I like the flow and structure alot....Thank you for sharing this peice of art

    • Thank you for sharing this story with me! How odd...I just felt the need to write this, this morning before my political Science class! How Ironic! Thank you for your endearing comment! ^_^