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Loneliness

Loneliness sinks into my heart.
an overwhelming sense of being lost.
Dreams plague my lonely shadows.
Dragging me deeper into my sorrows.

Author notes

II.
"dreams hide in the cracks
lonely people walk over"

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 21
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    I like the depth of emotion used in this piece.
    Very raw, dark, and honest

    Well penned