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The true meaning of love

love is the first feeling before all the bad stuff gets in the way,love is what makes you smile when your tired,love is when you kiss all the time. then when u get tired of kissing you still want to be together and u talk more,love is when u tell a guy u like his shirt,then he wears it everyday,when u love somebody,your eyelashes go up and down and little stars come out of u,

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LOVE!!
Written March 10th, 2004

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  • Piscean soul
    March 10, 2004
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    it's so sweet and beautiful and innocent keep up the good work....

  • cherubsfaeries
    March 10, 2004
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    nice interpretation of love! it flows well, keep up the great writes! ~ J