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For The Sake of Peace

For The Sake of Peace

All interests of men must be decent,
For nature to mankind is like a present.
All wills of men must be judge,
From doubt to fear its always of grudge.
All thought of men must be questioned,
For hearts of men are full of various errors.
All desire of men must be tested,
For wants of man is to his horrors.
All love of men must be tried,
For lust has left many spouses dried.
All wishes of men must be finite,
For the world happiness to be infinite,
All minds of men must be at ease,
For the sake of earth and human peace

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  • Perfect Asymmetry
    May 22

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    A wonderful poem you have here, dear poet! I love the theme you chose, mankind has so many flaws. Unfortunately, we're hard at changing.
    Keep writing!
    Nela