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[ A desert without sand ]

A desert without sand
Is no desert

A forest without trees
Is no forest

A person without love
Is no person

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  • atticus snow
    June 14
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    There is no sand in Antarctica... yet it is one of the largest deserts in the world.

    The last stanza/premise is loaded, and naive. Which is also rather pretentious. Pretension removes empathy and empathy is one of the key mechanisms in creating an earnest romantic vibe.

    But I'm just pedantic, so go figure.