make me fly
away from him
the one
that always
kills a heart
because
he thinks
he's wise.
Being a king
of his own mind
destroying
the love
once had
by others.
Selfish
destroying
the selfless;
because
he's false love
for a child.
Worthless
to care
for her,
emotionally
speaking.
Author notes
obviously I'm in a pissy mood
A contest entry
- Make me fly ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended May 20, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please don't ruffle my feathers
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well emotionally speaking words can bring the truth in front..yet I can feel that the scenario is curious and speaks about the truth which is still in the back of the words..well said...
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you are bubbling
cool down dear
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Being a king of his own mind. Yep, sounds like a typical man to me lol. Very good write.
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I really liked this, it was desperate but not a rant, depressive but not weepy ... an excellent write
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Pissed off LOL (stands back and waits for the claws to retract) Its a fundamental fact of life that male's just don't care half as much as females
because the way to a man's hart is not through the stomach, the doorway is further south 
Cyber Artist
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