Cute little girl, admires her daddies charm,
he’s a natural gift at bringing out her smiles.
“Again, again!” she begs,
amazed at his talent to enchant her.
He willfully plays her heart’s request.
Author notes
For future reference, please credit inspired write too:
"The magical forest" by rodthunderballs @ flickr.com
http://www.flickr.com/photos/11007888@N08/2872880002/
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 33. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended May 24, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please don't ruffle my feathers
Comments
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A really cute message, wrapped up in beautifully-written words. Really adorable ending too. Great work and thank you for your entry
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Tugs the heart
Really well done! To each his own, but I don't understand the non-capitals to open lines 2 and 4 - in a poem like this, anyway.
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nice write... a daddies girl... good luck
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nice and touching
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