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Intaglio




Today
your mouth
etched
another tomorrow
into my
flesh

© Oisin

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  • Nicolette gold member
    May 14

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    oh this is beautiful, Scott....simply love this small poem that shows that the effect of love isn't small.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 6
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    Very pretty, Scribe.



  • tara wilson gold member
    May 6
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    i love small poems like this. this is very beautiful - what a perfect metaphor.