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I was a cloud till I met you

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I was 

the gypsy wind's tambourine,

then I met your blue palm.
Sunbeams jingling

my rainbow zils...

turning me

into a rainsong of ecstatic joy.




 

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  • Hetha gold member
    July 3

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    Brief, yet powerful, bold and daring! This positively beams.

    ~Hettie


  • LadyElbereth
    May 23

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    Penned Art

    Just beautiful darling I love the flow of each and every line this is indeed the sweetest of music my heartfelt thank you darling for penning such a lovely piece.


    Lady E


  • Manicmuze
    May 17

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    Oh yea...mmmm very nice.
    This is perfect!
    Love little poems with big impact.
    Enjoyed it,
    ~ wendy


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 16

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    love the title of this poem, inder....from a cloud to a rainbow of music and song... that is so lovely. "blue palm" - what a beautiful visual and metaphor. lovely work - thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette