Lost with no explanation
Just a blank generation
Everything is
Buy & sell
Or whether it is
Heaven or Hell
Freedom or jail
Evaluating views
Left & right
Anxiety is tyranny
Day & night
So feed me Xanax
To feel alright.
One more moment,
I need to be high
I don’t care if tomorrow be
The day I die
I decided no longer will I try.
As long as the phone number remains
Of my favorite guy.
I am all out of happiness
I need more…
To load up the bowl,
Light it and hold the choke.
Let it go…
And watch the cloud of smoke
& witness it waltz eloquently from my lips
Just give me one more medicated peaceful moment.
For anxiety is tyranny & medication is my liberator
Author notes
Old feelings.
A contest entry
- Make me feel.. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended May 17, 38 entries
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i liked it
am all out of happiness
I need more…
To load up the bowl,
Light it and hold the choke.
Let it go…
And watch the cloud of smoke
& witness it waltz eloquently from my lips
It feels good to watch it become a painting in the sky... justifies it a bit doesn't it?
nice one
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Wow, very detailed piece here
stirring many genres of
emotion. You have strung
your thoughts very well here.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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This is a very good write. I loved this, filled with emotions and I liked the meaning you conveyed. Amazing, nice job.
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I'm glad for you for not doing pills
you deserve a hug and its so true never let life get you down
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I like the little line from Maynard
The rest was pretty good & to the point
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