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Noting Nothing, Noise & Equipoise dangling in the Never-Ever

Not[h]ing

 

As nature hates a vacuum NOTHING can

be but a figment fragment second-guessed.

Reality and dreams combine, their quest

is thus to banish NOTHING then to span

creation’s vastness, scanning big bang's van,

from tao trip evolution's also-ran

to space displacement through one hundredth dan

to Time condensing on initial jest

when request and inquest converge in gest

and atoms spin their tails till come to rest

contest, contestants, distance, über plan,

surmounting surface difference with zest.

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From mess congestive to suggestive test

of chaos, universal fractal fest

patterns pitter patter, matter must

invent itself from, to, through, into dust.

                   

  
Noise and Equipoise   

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Noise:

A signal the individual is unaware [s]he could decipher 

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Static is said to be noise,

'interference’ which often annoys,

yet the noise is not static

but code automatic,

sent by atoms which seek equipoise.

.

Here is there, where perception employs

perspicacity spurning poor ploys,

though zen trip's tip erratic

seems, dreams reel to vatic

conclusion aback zen tortoise.

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Noise: an echo where energy toys

with a world whose half-life it destroys,

this while reader, ecstatic,

ventures smile enigmatic,

sees the light, contradictions enjoys.

.

For 'pro', 'con' , twins identical, boys,

maintain nothing's vain, on 'porpoise'

spins life's jest, though dramatic

it appears, scarce pragmatic,

sense intense may discover, reach poise.

   

Author notes

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Wor[l]ds in [b]rackets convey two or more meanings
Not[h]ing noting and or nothing


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  • Seyloren
    September 21

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    Web of Knowledge

    To say you wove a web of interesting points would be an understatement. There are so many nuggets of information here mixed in with your own sense of poetic reasoning. Making it not only an educational read, but an interesting one at that.

    Bravo and good luck

    ~Sey


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 18

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    human perception
    creating something from nothing
    nothing balancing something...
    Einstein believed this, the universe is balanced and in order and although he was unable to prove his theory, most likely because of constant human perception, it is indeed balanced and in order.
    very creative write
    interesting to read
    very well done
    Thank you for your entry
    God bless you my friend...
    *raainbow*


  • drifting cloud silver member
    August 13

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    The reader senses a grand picture here. Lots of food for thought. Thanks for entering.

  • Superb

    A very fine write, as usual. Your illustrations are superb! Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.

  • Nothing becomes a very interesting something when thought about in real depth, perhaps like random particles of dreams that mean nothing on their own but may become something when those particles are amassed

    Static is said to be noise,
    'interference’ which often annoys,
    yet the noise is not static

    ... again, an interesting thought that echoes volumes with me though a current situation. There is much to ponder in these poems

  • this had a depth to it that i dont read often... very philosophical, leaving me to linger a bit on the edge of noise and static. thank you for your entry.

  • Cool

    for some reason my applauds arnt workin first time around

  • Yeah!!

    i love this!

  • Patterns, pitter patter, matter must,

    Now that, if not[h]ing else is just fun to say. I really enjoy the word play of the entire thing, but that line especially calls to me.

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