as she gazes down at herself
she wonders what he sees
why has he left her for the woman
what does she have so grand
she gazes down and appreciates
putting her finger on her nipples
she circles them and sighs pleasure
goes down further to investigate
her moans become more intense
as she gasp and has strong spasms
the wall holds her up as she smiles
"I don't even need that dirty bastard"
Author notes
Eva by the Window by ariosto
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I like the message to this one alot. This is a great anti-cheating poem i think. What one woman has is no more enticing then the next. Exellent.
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My
Amazing write. But even more the amazing are the number of women that prefer a bastard in their bed.. All my life it has baffled me. But hell who wants the nice guy anyway.
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So that's what she's about to do!?
'course a gal like this will not be lonely long.
Fun to read!
thanks for entering!
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sweet
you go girl top notch pen here -
Awe this is intense and some fierce anger or deep introspection going on yet all in all there is a bit of hope for the pleasure it is real and intense and in the end we all must go alone to the other side.
I like it, I like it so!
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cool
masturbate the anger away...because you'll feel a whole lot better after. people are fickle. orgasms are forever.
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wow. great job. just a hint of erotic to tease the reader. nice job with this. no, she doesn't need him. his loss.
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LMAO..you tell them sis. Sounds like he deserves it too. Have fun lol. Great and funny fun with nice sensuality in it.
Hugs, Jake
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Ha Ha Ha
How about a clean bastard
Because your silloette is smoking Heheh
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Sweet revenge dear poet an excellent and impish verse you go Sis ....love the imagery ..naughty naughty ..is it hot in here or ...LOL
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