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Flower

Nothing works..
I've tried everything.
I don't know what else to try.
I've told you everyday.
It's like you didn't even care.


Tell me what I'm doing wrong.
They're dead.
I can't revive them.
They were so beautiful.
The crimson color of beauty.
Symbol of eternal love.


Black and broken.
From lack of nourishment.
Is this no longer about a wilted flower?


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  • Excellent write love, I understand what you mean. I love how you began writing about a flower, a rose non the less and questioned the meaning of the flower to the loss of of a lover. Very genius. Keep writing love.
    <3 Katrina