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The demon I know



"My poetic stances have been

few and far between.

My inspiration has fallen dry

a drained oasis.

Bathed in cocaine

you're my inspiration.

Breath of fresh clean air

you're the curse I seek.

Twisting you pull me in

knot my insides please.

Like a drug you drain and fulfill

scratching and clawing my thoughts.

Complication lies beneath your skin

indecision behind your eyes.

Anti-venom you abandon me

when my blood is at its thinest.

Broken you mended me

with binds made of wire.

Cold you wrapped me

in blankets of cyanide.

Aching you offered me

the best pills you had.

Like satan himself

you watched me bleed.

Like hell itself

you welcomed me in.

In desperation you healed me

only to remodel and reshape.

Settled in your arms here

I am home.

Naked and unclothed

I run to the only demon I know.

For behind the door I close

may lie the demon I do not."

Author notes

So below is a new poem I wrote. I have not written in some time. Its not meant to be pleasant. I hope someone may understand my thoughts. Because I am not entirely sure I do.

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  • Benji
    July 26

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    In a strange way I find myself close to this state of mind. Sometimes but anyway I am still trying to rack up some money to visit u and Angela wants to meet u too if u dont mind I am hopping to see u soon your pal Benji. ps. I am running out of ways to contact people but I will try to get a hold of u soon.