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Chomp and Get Shot

It's funny how you were never there, never cared, never shared a moment of my life
Degrading me, changing me and berating me like a slave in a cage
Repeating, always defeating a primal face gliding through time with a high for life and a passion for competition, never cared to listen or wipe away my tears as they glistened on my cheek bone

And now your ravaging me like a savage in a shakesperean play
Grabbing at me and breaking me and my mind's about to be slain
Caress my face with your finger tips and dance along the flesh
Engulf my mind, trace the line and give unto my walls
The power of a drug so strong to morph my body until its time has come

Power escaped from wrinkled hands
Cannibal, it's tangible,
the plot remains unseen
To eyes faltering
When cateracts retract,
retrace and roll and dance in the back of the skull
To witness the mess in shambles
Here's the monster who shot his gun in the face of oblivion

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