When I see clouds, I see the breath of life carried upon the wind.
When I see rain, I see tears.
When I see hail, I see tears hardened.
When I see a hurricane, I see anger.
When I see an earthquake, I see a falling out.
When I see a volcano erupting, I hear a voice warning.
When I see a tornado, I see a blow out.
When I see a tsunami, I see a hand spanking.
When I see a star falling, I see hope.
In all these things I see compassion, patience,
discipline, forgiveness, and love.
When I see a comet on collision course, I see irreconcilable differences.
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I wrote this as more in terms of warnings from a higher being responding to what we do to each other and to the earth until there is no more warning.
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Ah, a Dominant insight into a tsunami being a hand spanking, interesting imagery and metaphor as the body of earth is chastized. Am not sure how compassion is seen in anger, hardened tears , a voice warning, maybe the poet pens the difference between what is seen and what is perceived to denote divorcing reality whilst marrying pen to paper?
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"When I see a comet on collision course, I see irreconcilable differences."
I thought this line appealed to me the most. However, was this the legal definition relating to martial separation or was it more like a statement? Interesting relating emotions to nature. Can you believe the physical world ranges from subatomic to the cosmic?
Thanks for sharing
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I wrote this as more in terms of warnings from a higher being responding to what we do to each other and to the earth until there is no more warning.
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When I see clouds, I see the breath of life carried upon the wind.
this line melts my soul
like a power driven
with each breath of wind
I see hope
I love this awesome write
Hugs Angel♥
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