Hugs and kisses
Dreams and wishes
Warmth in the lonely cold
A heart full of sighs
As I look in your eyes
Wishing my hand you’d hold
Hearing your voice
Now my heart has a choice
Love you or let me go
Should I hold on to the end,
Settle for being your best friend,
Or allow both to be so?
Forever my love for you will last
I fell so hard and so very fast
But I have yet to hit the ground
It seems my love for you will be my demise
As long as I get lost in your eyes
And the laughter in your voice remains my favorite sound
Your hugs and kisses
In my dreams and wishes
As tears fill my hazel eyes
It’s almost too much for me to stand
Existing hand in hand
Are love and demise
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This is very deep deep indeed. I really like this a lot. It worked quite well. You did a good job on this piece. Thank you for sharing.
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Exactly
How many times do best friends fall for each other? Some think it's easy, but on the other hand there is so much that could go wrong.
This poem tells me just that.
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welcome to allpoetry
I can understand where a write like this comes from. "A heart full of sighs" is a good line... and one I can especially relate to.
Nice job writing your thoughts out in poetic form.
I hope you will continue to write and share your words.
Enjoy the site.
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Welcome To Allpoetry
I liked your structure of this, the rhyming scheme was so perfect!
Welcome to AP, if there is anything I can help you with, feel free to IM me
best wishes,
Jeremy
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