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[ Silently sneaking behind ]

Silently sneaking behind
He craves something of mine
Onto the bed he pushes me
His strength so much more than mine


My pale white skin shimmers next to his
The only source to see what is going on
The stream of moonlight
Through the sheets i see nothing


He ties and blindfolds me
And begins kissing my neck
down to my chest his lips and tongue crept
all the way down to my thigh
I gave in


Slipping into his S&M fantasy
little did he know there was something
Something different about me
as he got down on his knees
I slid out of the bindings
and bit right into him


Victimizing

 

He now had the mark of a beast
Of me
as i walked out the door
my teeth shimmering all you could see
was crimson blood flowing


Pure ecstasy..


I like to bite
Beware of me

Author notes

I wrote this on the prompt for a contest bite.. so i gave it a little bite so to speak.. lol I love vamires and brought myself into the poem ENJOY!

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  • I loved where you took the prompt. I wondered what prompt you'd gone with until the brutal end. Very good. Thanks for entering.


  • Antipodi
    May 5
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    Ouch surprise ending or should say mending reader is still hurting great poem poet LOL