black thorns around my heart,
this is ware all the pain starts,
i cant do this shit anymore,
yet closer you make me lure,
so i sit in my room listing,
my emothins raging,
my music outa control,
and deppression takes its toll,
my minds starts to twist,
and more and more pissed,
till i decide,
to say goodbye...
did you like it?
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very awesome!!!!
well i say awesome alot and this was so unique and overly awesome ill say beautifully wonderful
this was beautifully wonderful!!! i LOVED IT!!
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ware---where
emothins----emotions
outa--outta
deppression---depression.
i understand the feeling, but it was a little cliche. -
wow
this is amazing i sometimes feel that way cause I cant take this world but I got to keep trying
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yea lol life blows
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sweet poem dude its really powerful
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haha
thx for ur comment -
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no problem
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WOW! this poem is exceedingly strong! i love it! i like how u rhymed as well! great work!
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haha
thx for ur comment =)
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its good. but don't say goodbye or someone like me would cry.
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This is amazing. I loved the part about the black thorns!
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yea
thx for u comment -
haha
thx =)
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wow
this is amazing !! i love it. its so true. but dont say goodbye -
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thx
and i was really pisst off when i wrote this thats why its all like that...
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yea...
thx for the comment <3 -
So real
I feel like you are in my my mind sometimes.
and all these seem so real.
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omg... this is... wow, black thorns around my heart... i love this part, my mind starts to twist, does this emotion happen to you in life because what i feal when i read your poetry is real... wow... keep it up
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thx
thx for ur comments -
yes i liked it.
so sad though ;_;
chin up, hey?
xx
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I Love it!
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awwww i loved it its amazing
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How... SAD I SHOULD say... but ... i like it
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