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So Did You Forget?[You Wish You Had My Life](American Man)

So did you forget?
We live in America.
What you see is what you get.

Judge me, Judge me.
I have the life you want.
Admit it, prerequisite
desire.
I live in the tenement,
and you live in suburbia.
You've got it all,
money well spent,
I've got my guitar,
I've got the park,
I've got skankin.
After dark.

Success, repeated failure,
without loss of will,
take me and break me,
and judge as you will,
you're so successful,
you're just the man,
NO!
Success is getting up,
when we start to slam.

When we bash you and beat you,
and break all your bones,
it's getting back up,
and putting down the phone,
it's no more papers,
no more boss,
no more cubicle,
just one silly loss.
Loss of the chain,
that ties your ass down,
loss of the ladder,
the corporate clown.

I live in a tenement.
You live with your wife.
I've got all i'll ever need.
Yeah, you wish you had my life.

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Haha. I have nothing to say about this. Just awful.

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  • loved it!
    BRAVO! BRAVO!
    Cleverly done!
    and damn....ain't the truth!

    favorite verse:
    When we bash you and beat you,
    and break all your bones,
    it's getting back up,
    and putting down the phone,
    it's no more papers,
    no more boss,
    no more cubicle,
    just one silly loss.
    Loss of the chain,
    that ties your ass down,
    loss of the ladder,
    the corporate clown.


    well done!
    you do appear to look like a fearless
    beautiful glutton!
    ears/Seattle

  • You live in America lol.
    You didn't forget


  • Mick Mack
    June 16
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    Good good good.

  • i thought this was pretty good. nice work keep it up!

  • pretty damn good


  • JustDavey
    May 5
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    nice

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