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Morning

The morning sun
I can feel it on my face
The sheets are soft against my bare skin
But no one is there beside me
I can feel it between my legs
My thigh can feel the pressure
I think less about the sun
And more about myself
Should I?
It's getting harder to ignore
I'd lose myself again this morning
I'll look forward to what the day has in store instead
Nothing
I lose myself
It's harder than it has been in months
But who will share it?

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  • Sunday Rain
    May 25, 2009
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    o.o

    I like this write


  • Bruce silver member
    May 5, 2009
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    This is a very wistful and well executed write. Well done for your maiden voyage!


  • ShadowWeaver
    May 5, 2009
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    awesome, its pretty cool


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    May 5, 2009

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    You asked for honesty and I will give it..
    I really liked your first AP poem
    There is a gentleness to the hardcore thoughts
    the sadness and lone thoughts flow within..
    We can all wait for that morning to come
    and the feeling of emptyness..
    You hun should write an entry in my contest I am hosting on my page..
    Lets see what you come up with ..
    Sensual is perfect
    Look forward to reading more of your writes
    Julie