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Cancer

The coughing
the sneezing
the smell of lotion
the quiet
the monitor
the beeps
then comes the silent line
you never think you see something like that
you hope not
not to your grandfather..

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This poem is about my grandfather he was in the hosptial last year he had cancer and in front of me mymohter nad my step father he died right there...

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