You'll know the feel of soft skin
As the silk slides down my back
Without ever touching my fire
You will sense all that you lack
You are just a starving actor
Searching for your chosen role
You think you're the black belt master
If allowed.... I'll own your soul
Breathe in my honeyed nectar
Listen as I softly sigh and moan
You will writhe beneath my body
Let my passion take you home
Let my twin peaks touch your chest
Feel my lips find your dark thighs
You will strive to be the conqueror
I will prove the beliefs are lies
Your glistening skin with toes that curl
As we join erotic flight
You will view the stars behind my eyes
And moan testimony to all my might
The passion....yes this primal need
It has lasted through sands of time
For I am woman feel my strength
Your soul now and forever mine
We now lay back with panting pause
Watching night... break into dawn
I have won the champion belt this night
As you drift off with fulfilled yawn
Stretching around noon when you wake
Your world has changed you know
I have won the title bout
You will never let me go....
A contest entry
- What haven't I read yet? by Antebellum.
500 points, ended August 4, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITES= BEST LOVE POEMS PLS by Deaths Prayer.
1500 points, ended September 18, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely heated quest of who is truly the conqueror.
Thanks for featuring this, otherwise I would not have read it.
Buddy
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We now lay back with panting pause
Watching night... break into dawn
I have won the champion belt this night
As you drift off with fulfilled yawn
Lovely. A well rounded story of temptation and desire.
I wish you all the best in your contests, love.
jin
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Thank you for entering my contest. this is not really about love is it? it is about what a woman thinks is love
I never saw anything in this that said to me it was right for my contest. thank you again for entering
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oooooo wow.... hehe...... this was perfect.... loved it... great imagery.... good luck in contests......... thanks for sharing this with us.... hugs and much love.... ily
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oops guess i commented twice on this one sorry
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flawless rhyme, fantastic write
thanks for taking the time to enter,
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you have 32 lines so if she asked you for 32 lines you didnt go over you dont count the spaces between the lines but seems she did... dont sweat it.... great job.... if it was in a contest i was judging you would have gotten gold for sure....! keep up the awesome job....1
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wonderfully sculpted....
pleasure to read...and damn
if it doesn't make you feel proud to be
a woman! Flawless flow, perfect in length!
ears/Seattle
way to write!
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stunning
i really like this it showed exactly what i wanted to see, but, unfortunately its too long but it was really good the flow the content and all were excellent very good job with this
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Too Long?
I guess I am confused I thought it was 32 lines long ....is it with the title and the lines between too, I guess I need to find out the in and outs of this but thank you for your comments and please leave me a message so I don't get it wrong again..I would appreciate it...Thanks!
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