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Perfection

Behind cosmetic face
Eyes display broken smile
Enveloped in expectations
To be puppet of perfection

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 12

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    And the

    cosmetic industry makes oodles of dollars counting on just this! You say a lot here in one short sentence! Bravo. Congrats...


  • hollowriver
    May 5
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    deep, and imagery
    loved it