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infinity's end (acrostic)

I look around and your
Nowhere to be
Found, here
I wait to see
Nothing but your face
Independant from the world 
Time erased all things resolved
Yet now that its over
Seeing isn't quite believing

Everything you have ever said
Now where are your promises
Down the drain

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  • trekkergirls bank
    June 10

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    one small correction... I am anal sometimes about these things... last word first line is your. It should be I think you're or you are. Other wise this is an excellent write. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • tatteredheart..
    May 8

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    your face, you hide behind.
    everything you ever said, gave me hope

    just somelines, i thought may go with.

    alot of potential with this. you can almost feel the pain.


  • HystericalHeart
    May 5

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    Oh, i like this. It's so simple.. But, with alot of meaning. I enjoyed this. ^-^

    Good Luck in the Contest Brother.