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Hope

Looking to see
around the world
as the moon
runs around.

But to see
life from
where you are
you'll see the
ocean go below

The people you
might love most
will hope
more than the
cries above.

But my cries
have no one to
hope upon for

 

Yet the crushing

noise is the last

hope everyone

else can wish for.

 

And that's

when i'll

have my pass.

 

for the hope

doesn't run

through my life.

Till my body has

had it with

this life. 

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  • metal4ever
    June 6
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    this is awesome, keep up the great work