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animal

She is such a beautiful figure, you should see her while she is running in the sun.... she looks like such an angel, and runs as fast as the wind! She is such a beauty I wish she was mine, but she is wild, and she will never be mild enough to get close enough to me! But I will always wish that the black beauty will always be mine.

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This poem is about an animal that I have wanted for my whole life!

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  • This can be related to my Melodie poem,well done on your part. I love the description!