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Your Amazing Dream

Your dream is very unlikey to have me involved
but not so long ago, you made my problem solved

You dreamed about me, in the weirdest way
but in the end, it made my day

so here it is, your amazing dream
this is the one that made me feel supreme
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You were in your house, your brother was too
the house was on fire, in it was your brother, me, and you

you were screaming his name, i was sitting on te floor
you got your brother's hand, and carried me out the door

We sat in the street until the fire department came
It was a very sad night, sitting in shame

You re asking me what your parents will say
when they come home, will they react a bad way?

I told you it was alright, You would be just fine
I would do anything it takes, to pay back every dime.

You said it wasn't my fault, I were just there
Waiting for him, in a blank stare

So we sat on the pavement, until morning came
his parents were sad, they called my name

THey wanted to know if he could stay with me
I said "of course" and in my head, said YIPEE!!

Then the dream ended and I was in shock
after you telling me this, my heart was unlocked

The old key was another but now it is you
You are my love, so pure and true

IT made my day bright when you told me this
there will never be a day with you I would want to miss

Author notes

I made this about a dream a guy told me I was in of his. It was sweet

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  • Babyg7 gold member
    2 days ago
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    aww...i luv this poem!!!

  • imagine--grace
    September 25
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    AWWW...

    loved the wording and your reaction to the dream. very romantic


  • kaylalala
    September 24
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    cute

    wow that is amazingly good


  • rosebuds
    June 20

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    good poem


    no need to change the words of this poem , it evokes all i want to visulize and the words are well expressed.


  • rosebuds
    June 20
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    very descriptive and the poem evokes all the images to me too, loved it

  • awww

    I love this poem of mine. Its soooooo cute! I think! I can't stop reading it. Everytime I read it I go AWWW!!! But this guy is just so sweet. I wish we were going out.

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