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Simplicity

simplicity,
i want you,
so why does so much come between.
i mean...
why?
why cant we be?
and I'm sure if you knew, that you'd want me.
well maybe?
you see...
every plain ceiling i see your face,
every reflection, all the beauty i can trace.
cause...is it me?
or does every star that draws my eye carry your memory.
but look,
you make me say ... just, just wow
and shouldn't that be enough?
the you and me in the here and now.
why cant they all see..?
whatever happened to...simplicity?

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Just another piece i wrote recently.

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  • Devilkid
    May 6

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    wow that was amazing if that is about a chick then she is lucky to have you some one who expresses his feelings instead of hidding them