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My latest a.d.d.i.c.t.i.o.n...

your [eyes] kill me
the way you [touch] me makes me weak
our [hard] stares
the way you [watch] me smoke
it makes me

your [laugh] makes me smile
the things you [talk] about
we [love] the same music
Remember?
Shes so [[lovely]]

our [random] tickle fights
the way we just [dont] care
when i play with you [hair]
the way you [bite] you lip
baby, your a.m.a.z.i.n.g
the way you [sing] to me
makes me [scream] inside

*EVERYTHING* about you
makes me [smile]
baby, your my latest a*d*d*i*c*t*i*o*n
and i {{love}} it
^__^

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  • amazing!

    lourve it!

  • Awh, I really like this

    " your [eyes] kill me
    the way you [touch] me makes me weak
    our [hard] stares
    the way you [watch] me smoke
    it makes me "

    My favourite bit

    Oh so very good

  • "our [random] tickle fights
    the way we just [dont] care
    when i play with you [hair]
    the way you [bite] you lip
    baby, your a.m.a.z.i.n.g
    the way you [sing] to me
    makes me [scream] inside"

    Love these lines.
    I can completly relate.