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Memories

I am watching the rain
Fall
From that little place
where you and me, we used to be.
I can still feel your breath upon my neck,
And i can still feel the warm touch of your hands
wrapped around me.
Small tears are running down my face,
Each one a memory,
A moment that we have shared.
My eyes are red from crying,
And I am cold
But I will continue to stand here,
As here is where I feel closest to you.
I have a single flower,
Your favourite. A single pink rose;
I am clutching it a little too tight, as
Blood is starting to run where the thorns have pricked my fingers...
But I don't feel it.
I don't feel anything, except a sense of deep sadness.
For I have lost you, my dearest friend and lover,
I have lost you
And I can never bring you back.

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