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barbie doll

I just was never good enough,
Not good enough for you.
You shipped me off to China then
To see what they could do.

With careful hands in sweaty lands
They stripped me of my joy
When work was done, new life begun
I知 now your perfect toy.
Yes I知 your perfect Barbie doll
White teeth with eyes bright blue
I値l be your perfect girly girl
I値l be the one for you.

Oh what a shame, I hate to say
One day my legs will snap
My body cold, my eyes dull grey
An old, bored piece of crap.
Sorry I知 not your Barbie doll
Not scared to walk alone;
Never a perfect Barbie doll,
Proud not to be a clone.

You thought  I wasn稚 good enough,
But you just failed to see;
I致e always been, and always will,
So glad to just be me. 


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  • AWWW, you have a very powerful message here. be happy with who you are, and i love how you got that across through your poem. great piece!

  • I love this and the message in it. I'm glad that you like being who you are. Great write

  • this is really amazing;; its relatable; &&* differnt in a good way!

  • Wow. I really adored this poem; a powerful write. I could really relate

    Keep up the amazing work!!

    Maria

  • stunninggg!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
    just be you! and those who are true will love you for it
    such a true poem katie

    xxx

  • You tell 'em girl! Besides the fact that this is too true, it had amazing imagery and was beautifully written. Congrats!
    ~Joey

  • DAM RIGHT!! YOU SHOW THAT BOY WHO U REALLY ARE !!!

    beautiful poem. and really true.. and smart. thats all they are. barbies. and ur better then that

    xx

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