As sharp as a razor,
And as deep as the hurt I feel...
A slice here,
A slice there...
A scar there,
And another here...
What a silent fall,
What a beautiful feeling...
My final transition out of life,
And that breathless moment I longed for...
Goodbye Cruel World...
Please tell me what you think
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Very dark and rather chilling. I really hope you don't feel this way and that this is just a write. I think it was beautifully penned with a sense of peace to the transition from one life into the next. I have read quite a few of these types of poems and still trying to understand the feelings shown. A short piece that spoke so clearly of someones final moments when they felt themselves freed from whatever worries they had. Well done.
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my mistress,
how dark and sweet does death sound like ocean waves. this strange world with these strange people how does a stranger survive? i feel the raw emotional pain that flows in your verse.
fellow poet
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