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Moving... ♥

Took hold of you in my heart
letting go of what was said,
and how cruel others were
against you and i.
I may thought someday
we will be the one luckiest couple,
but that was a imagation.
All in my mind that it could be,
but hearing others shouldn't
made us fall apart.
I keep on holding on,
but you got blinded.
No more grudge.
No more sorrow.
I am standing still as a friend,
and I don't want no more fights
with you.
It's about having friends
or nothing at all.
Learning the hard way isn't what I want,
but a friendship is what I would like to have.
You might want me back,
but I need to learn from my mistakes.
Like I said,
No more blindness.

You respect me,
or you don't?
Either way...
I choose.

Thank you for reading!! =] Comment if wanted. xx

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  • CrazzyCat
    May 14

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    love this poem. i know how you are feeling here. hang in there, it will all be ok. you have talent, keep writing

  • awesome


    You respect me,
    or you don't?
    Either way...
    I choose.

    I really loved this closing and for whatever reason people gave input on why this is a bad coupling is really no ones concern. Being a person who is friends with almost all their Exs it is a harder road than a clean break. Tough it out and the subjects could redeem their love later