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Memories ( which is on my other login too )

I wake up just staring out my window at the beautiful breath-taking sun. And I just sit there wondering how can he be so wonderful? He gets me to smile, laugh, sing, and dance like I never have before! He makes me feel so alive, I feel like one of a kind. I actually feel like me for once in my life... I wake up just staring out my window.

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  • What a great way to put something powerful into small details! Way to go!


  • Raspy
    May 8

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    Gr8t

    Sunrise throug my window,out on the terrace, sitting on the beach
    Is an intense magical time. I know exactly what you mean. For me, it does so much more than just a smile. Thankyou for sharing.

  • i wish i could wake up feelling like this. i look out and the neighbors chairs block the raindrops falling. seriously. but you just took me to a place that i would love to be. the only suggestion i have would be to work on the format a bit. i think it would read better. thank you for sharing this with me tonight and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie