Behind every shade of my mind
There is a bright light as well.
When I look in the mirror I see
Someone else looking back at me.
There is a good person there sometimes
And once in a while a bad one glances back.
Flashes of light cross the earth's surface
As darkness covers it in it's own blanket.
Solace can be found not only in happiness
But surprisingly in sorrow, as the heart beats.
This does everyone around us some good
In an odd way everything is misunderstood.
The Sun rises in the East and sets in the west
The moon follows the same pattern,Shining.
Stars are in the night and clouds in the day
The world as a whole moves in this same way.
A contest entry
- Darkness and Light by guardian warrior.
550 points, ended May 5, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
first impression?
Comments
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Very powerful piece. I like the contrast between the background, being white and then the black vastness that is outer space Very nice. Best wishes in the contest!


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Thank you! I really appreciate it!
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Powerful here! with such a message of hope!!!


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Thanks Antonio! ^-^ Glad you liked it...
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I like how you played this one out. Never a disappointment are you? Good luck to you.
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THANK YOU FOR THE GOLD! ^_^
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