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Love last proclamation

Once i knew only love
  not hate, sadness, or anger, but
  with you lying there I feel, I feel real.

The happy sappy days, are over,
  when we would lie together
  spinning in the whirl pool of our love, .

Love, kept us laying in that grass, and
   under the bluest of blue skies
   never thinking of the real world, if only we knew.

Children was what we were, but now I see
   as you lie there in that bed to weak to even speak
   that our hearts are not eternal.

You take my hand, while you make one last stand
   feeling you go limp, I lose the strength
   that you told me to keep, and i begin to weep.

Never did such fat tears role down a cheek;
   never did ones heart shatter like mine, and
   one last proclamation to the dead.

"You're heart ceased to live, to beat, and to pump
   but you're love has not, never
   shall you love leave me."

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