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Is it
possible
to draw from a
well of silence the words that
will make everything
make sense
again?
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.
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..
Or the
words to
make the pain
in your heart just
fucking go
away?
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Can
silence
be siphoned
away to leave only
answers in
your dry
well?
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.
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...
Or
does it
have to be
eaten away, or
swallowed down until
you're ready to
burst from
it?
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.
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..
A
silence
has fallen
between us,
and I don't know
how to fix it.
Can you do
it?
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..
.
..
..
Author notes
Well, definitely not one of my wordier ones, but line number-wise it's probably quite long, counting all of the dots. I guess it makes sense that it's not very wordy, considering it's about silence. I realize there are some awkward line breaks, but I was really focused on what it says and the structure of the poem, more than line breaks.
The story: something happened where I felt as if there were no words left between said person and myself, and the first line just popped into my head. Spoken like this, "Is it.... possible.... to draw from... a well of..... silence...... the words that.. will make.. everything... make sense again?" and it's not too far off from how the breaks are now. But they look nicer than that would have. This was not written today, Monday May 4th, but instead yesterday, after my dear friend told me, "Just tell him how you feel." And... our relationship was kind of torn after that. Everything is alright again, sort of, it won't go back to the way it was, but at least everything has sort of turned out well. =j tell me what you think.
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By the way, what's a bobbin? 0.o
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Yessirree Bob...(Who's Bob?)
I don't know what's going on, and while ignorance is usually bliss this is driving me crazy. But I love this poem. The line breaks AREN'T awkward-in fact, they go in a rhythmic sort of pattern. I love how you mention a well and the line breaks remind me of little water droplets falling down said well...By the way: I MISS CHOO SOOOO MUCH VEDER!!!
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kerushi-chan!
suki desu! すけです！
I am sorry you are sad! *eats mass cake, spins in chair, dies* -
Aw Kels :]
Soul. Def has one.
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