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Perfect Fit

We are picture perfect
A perfect match
Our bodies fit together perfectly
Me and you together forever
We are like a puzzle
Finding the perfect match
The piece that fits the other
We connect on a different level
We are similar in so many ways
You and me
We were a match made in heaven
Sculpted to fit together perfectly
You are my other half
When you are not near
I am at a loss
Together we are one
You are the one I need
The one that knows everything about me
Yet still loves me
Loves me for who I am
Not for someone I wish I could be
You know all my secrets
All my fears
Wehat makes me happy
And what makes me sad
We are one

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  • PoetBoy2008
    August 20
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    This is an amazing poem, i'm glad you finally finished it, it's just as i expected, amazing. great job.

  • PoetBoy2008
    August 14
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    i'll leave my full comment when it's finished.

  • musiccraze2009
    August 13
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    with a little expanding this could a great piece! good luck


  • crazy eyes
    May 11
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    good start

  • J Macabre
    May 5
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    That's a great way to describe love. Excellent work.

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