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Twisted (in four stanzas)

A boy runs the fence
Silence
Walking through a park
Chaos

Grass blades injured
Happiness
Glaring sunlight
Darkness

Clicking shoes
Entertainment
Dogs fighting, snarling
Love

Smiling children
Sadness
Perfect girl
Broken

Author notes

A walk home from the park can be a very strange thing.

A walk home from the park.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    May 4

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    Jess posted a new poem yay great job on this. I loved the ending "Perfect girl
    Broken"
    I hope you start posting more poems and if you do I look forward to reading them


    -Steve-