Things race through my head,
They go right,
Then they go left,
Then they run into a wall!
Ouch...
That kinda hurt! lol
A contest entry
- Was it Duty or Choice? by Ken-Maverick.
700 points, ended May 21, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Have you been reading my mind. I like this. It is brief, cute and zany. Very good.
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This made me smile.I like it .It happens the same way to my thoughts.Strange,stupid thoughts
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JUDGED!
A wonderful short verse you've penned here,
your last line was perfect for this piece
All the best to you in the contest
Ken -
lmao! loved it!!!
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hehehe =P silly yay!
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